You should not go to War at the Age of 17!
I strongly believe that at the age of 17, you should not be able to join the army. You are not mentally or physically ready it could cause death!
Firstly, you are not mentally ready to go to war.You might think you are ready but you will find that you'd be very stressed. If you come home you will get nightmares and may even not be able to bring yourself to go outside of the house.
Secondly, you are not physically ready, you could die because you have to run from a bomb or gas. You might not be able to out run it and the next thing you know you are dead. Imagine the pain that would cause?
Finally, you could die and imagine what it would feel like to watch your friends and family die. It would be too big of a risk of death or injury. Would you be able to deal with the pain of watching the horror of the death of your close friends and family?
Therefore, you’re not mentally or physically ready to go to war. Imagine the pain you would cause your friends and family if you didn't come back. You should not be able to go to war at the age of 17.
By Leila
Hi Lelia,
ReplyDeleteGreat persuasive text. I have been blown away by the creativity of your mind and finishing it off with the rememberance of the reasons you gave in the text. I am truly amazed!
From Scott
G-day Leila
ReplyDeleteI loved how you put so much enthusiasm in your text.
from Riley :) :] ;] ;)
dear Leaila
ReplyDeleteIreally liked the persuasive words you used and, you described almost all of the reasons 17 year olds shouldnt go to war i am really looking foward to reading more of you persuaive texts
from Macca :)
Hi Leila,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you put in lots of persuasive words to back up your text, I really enjoyed the reading your persuasive text great job.
From Taylah :)
Hi Leila,
ReplyDeleteWow! Your persuasive text left me in awe! I loved the way that you stated your reasons boldly. They really make an impact on peoples opinion. I also love the way you used creativity to make the reader stay on the edge of their seat! I can't wait to see more of your fantastic writing!
From Tash;)