Friday, February 27, 2015

Flooded

Families houses are getting flooded,
Lots of mud,
Over the bridge gushing down,
On the bottom of our shoes,
Dripping wet!
Everywhere, making a huge mess,
Dreadful falling into the river that was formed.



By Leila and Tate

3 comments:

  1. To Tate and Leila

    I liked your poem because it had lots of dialoge
    from Riley Pes

    i liked your poem because it really explained what happens when to rains
    From Charlie Geddes

    HAVE A GOOD DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. Dear Tate and Leila,

    We thought your poem was very fantastic. Your story hooked us in to read more about it. Great job

    From Macca and Toby

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  3. Hello Leila and Tate

    I really like your poem because it tells some facts about the rain and floods hapening around tom price and houses getting flooded you realy write a poep to start of
    by brandelin and caden

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