Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Weather vs Man Kind

   Weather vs Man Kind 

Tidal wave tanks, as strong as a million armies rushing from Newman.
Snow bombs, as strong as a NUKE, sneaking past Paraburdoo.
Tornadoes turning up the dust hitting our skin like a gun, as sharp as one thousand knives striking down Mine Road.

Parks torn to bits, buildings exploded and our school flattened to the ground.

We equipped ourselves ready for battle.
Dodging the snow bombs, shielding ourselves from the tornado guns, and blasting the tidal wave tanks.
We ran to shelter and used the debris to rebuild the fallen
turrets, buildings and hospitals.

We fought with bravery and remain the winners.

By Charlie

    

2 comments:

  1. Hi Charlie,
    You comment on my blog a few days ago. I really enjoyed your writing, it is incredibly descriptive. It paints a vivd picture in my mind.
    I can't wait to read more of your work.
    By Chum

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  2. Hi Charlie,
    Your piece of writing was amazing! I really enjoyed how you put lots of descriptive words in your poem. I can't wait to read more of your writing
    By Caden

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