Thursday, August 6, 2015

Tanka poem

In the deep clear spring

were water lillies do cling

everyone is always there

cause there's flowers everywhere


I love Spring its beautiful


by lily


4 comments:

  1. What an amazing poem!

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  2. Wow! what a great descriptive poem!
    I really like it and I think you did a great job! :)

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  3. You guys are writing really good poems!
    I like your first two lines they rhyme really well.

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