There I was
standing at the front door ready to open it. I walked into my new house with
excitement and ran straight to my room. I could not believe that I didn't come
home quicker.
A couple of
hours later I felt really bored and had nothing to do. So then I asked Mum if
she needed any help “No thanks honey” Mum replied. So I walked to my room laid
down on my bed then I heard a “BANG” “Aww” I yelled Mum ran into my room
“What’s wrong Zae” Mum said, “I banged my head” I laughed then Mum walked out.
KNOCK, KNOCK
I quickly ran to the door to see who it was. “Hi” it was my cousin and Aunty
and Uncle who came over. We played a lot of games and had a lot of fun. But 20
minutes later had to go sadly!
The next
morning Mum, Dad, Deijah and Honor –Jheyde and I went to my old house to
collect the rest of our stuff. I wasn’t that happy about it, but I had to do it
anyway but that was so, so, so BORING.
Well I know
I didn’t do anything for my holiday but I had a amazing time moving into my new
house.
By Azaelia
Dear Azaelia,
ReplyDeleteThis is AMAZING!! This is a great, descriptive piece of writing. I love it so much it makes me feel like I was there with you. Well done and keep up the great work and I cant wait to read you next master piece!
From Meg :)