Monday, May 11, 2015

Bounce

“ Next session “ said a voice, I was at one of the most funniest places on earth, it was called bounce! I was really there with my family, you could go in any section that you wanted there was a dodge ball court, stunt section and even a free jump trampolines, it was substantial.

As I walked in the dodge ball court I saw my second cousins so we went on the same team and we kicked butt. As soon as we got off we went to the stunt section, while we were on there my youngest second cousin smashed his face on one of the pads and got a blood nose, my Uncle rushed to help him, after about five minutes he was back on like nothing happened.

After some good bouncing the parents said “it’s time to go.” My eldest second cousin and I asked “ where are we going,” the adults replied saying “ we are going to the carousel for lunch.” I was so excited because I had money I could spend and because this new video game had come called Halo Reach, and I was planning to buy it.

In conclusion, I loved hanging out with my family

By Riley

4 comments:

  1. sounds like you had a fun day at bounce

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  2. nice work p.s you are lucky to make your own apps we don't

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  3. hey this is Hana I love your story sounds like a lot of fun I also like how you added a conculsion to your story hope you write another one.

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